OF WAR Series Overview–Opinions Requested

I did something amazing today! I wrote! LOL I haven’t done it in THREE WEEKS! OMG! No wonder I felt so sniffled and plugged-up.🙂

Anyway, I had to come up with an overview of the series for an upcoming blog tour. Our friend, Tanja suggested I do it from Maggie, the granddaughter’s point of view. I took her advice and did my best to condense the highlights of 5 novels and 1 short story into 4 pages. Geez! Not much fun but, well, thanks to Tanja, I think it came out better than it would have otherwise. So here it is for your sharp eyes and with the hope you’ll give a thumbs up or down on it.

By Lisa Beth Darling
An Overview

My name is Maggie, I’m fifteen years-old, named for my grandmother Magdalena MacLeod who was the Lost Queen of the Fey Kingdom. If you’ll give me a few minutes I’d like to tell you about my family.

My Grandfather, Magdalena’s Husband, is Ares the God of War. He didn’t like her name and so he took it upon himself to rename her; Alena. Much to the displeasure of his Family, the Olympians, Ares fell head over heels for my grandmother who washed up on the shore of his island while Ares was sat in a wrongly imposed exile. He caused quite a stir when he refused to give her over to them in exchange for having his exile lifted and being welcomed home. Yet, as he once said, he would rather have one night with Alena than to have 10,000 nights on Olympus. So in love with her was he that when Aphrodite snatched her away from her and returned my grandmother to Cernunnos whom she’d managed to evade for two hundred years, Ares tracked him down to his forest Keep. There, after being held prisoner a short while, he cut down Cernunnos and turned his ancient fortress to ash.

Ares and Alena were married on the very beach, in the very spot, where she washed up on his shore. They were happy. So happy together but for such a short time. Alena became pregnant with my father, Raven and the Olympians, especially my Great-Grandfather, were very upset. They didn’t want some half-breed running around Olympus. Knowing his Father’s cunning and cruelty when Zeus presented Ares with a deal to keep Alena and Raven safe from harm he took it. The deal was that Ares would have to break his vow to Alena and sleep with Aphrodite bringing Zeus a full-blooded Olympian. Ares kept his part of the bargain and went to Aphrodite’s bed but while in the throes of vengeful passion Alena went into labor alone. She cried out for her Husband but he wasn’t there by the time he arrived with my Great-Grandmother, Hera, he’d nearly lost his Wife and his Son.

Raven was born he was loved by his mother and his Father but hated by Zeus in spite of the bargain he struck with Ares. From the union of Ares and Aphrodite, Trinity was born. She was a sweet girl, a full-blooded Olympian but showed no sign of having special powers. Not like Raven who could shoot balls of ice from his palms.

Not a being a full-blooded Olympian, it was up to Zeus whether or not to Accept my Father as one of them. Although my Grandmother had many mis-givings she was willing to allow it until Zeus, during the Ritual of Acceptance, tried to lay upon my infant Father the title of God of the Damned. She snatched her Son from the altar before Zeus could touch him with his staff and complete the ritual.

Much against the wishes of Ares and Alena, Apollo, Ares’ nemesis was made Raven’s guardian should anything happen to his Brother. Apollo gladly accepted the honored position as feeling of ill will was mutual. Apollo would do anything to hurt Ares but what he wanted above all else was my Grandmother. Working in concert with Zeus to bring down Ares and his new happy family, Apollo befriended Raven and planted wicked thoughts in my Father’s head when he was only a child. In the end the goal of Zeus and Apollo was simple; they wanted Raven to grow so enraged that he would kill his Mother which would force to kill Raven and then, in a fit of depression, kill himself. Zeus would be rid of his least favored Son and the bastards Ares brought to Olympus.

Raven grew tall, strong, and angry until a deep hatred for his mother burned in his heart and spilled over to his Sister. Until one day, Trinity suffered a horrible accident; she fell from the very heights of Olympus all the way to the bottom of the mountain. Aphrodite was heartbroken at the loss of her Daughter. Ares was angry. Alena was suspicious of her Son and her Husband. Ares and Alena grew apart. Ares returned to Aphrodite’s bed leaving his Wife pregnant alone with their Son. That night, Ares and Aphrodite created my Uncle, Hunter. When my Grandfather returned home to his fortress at the break of dawn, he found Alena broken and bloody at the bottom of a mighty marble staircase. He always suspected that Raven pushed her down the stairs although my father kept quiet and the assertion that he’d never touched his mother.

That day, Alena gave birth to my Aunt, Rose. The baby was small, too small. She was weak, frail, and malformed. Although Ares tried to do what he felt was the right thing and end her suffering he couldn’t do it. Rose struggled, her life was not easy, but she was full of joy and determination. As her mother fell into a four year sleep, Raven grew and Rose grew and Ares fell into depression with his little Rose his only ray of light.

In secret, my Father and Apollo hatched a plan to bring anarchy to reign on the Mortal World. Apollo even convinced my Father that Ares would approve of the chaos and turmoil in the world below, that as the God of War, he would be proud. So Raven did all that could to bring about the destruction of the status quo in the world below. As riots broke out all over the planet, and the financial system crumbled, on Olympus my Father began fighting for acceptance among the Olympians began his Trials while Alena slept. Each God was to lay before him a Herculean task, the first of which was set by Hades. Raven went to the Underworld to rescue an innocent soul trapped in Tartarus. He faced many dangers and had to be quick on his feet and in his mind to pass all the way through Tartarus to the very center and the City of Dis where he faced the Furies and passed all of their tests. But Tisiphone presented him with a challenge of her own; if he made it back to Olympus in victory, he was to rescue my Grandmother from her deep sleep. She told him that Alena was not in coma but being held prisoner by Morpheus. If he were to rescue he would erase all his past misdeeds and be given a clean start. He would not face eternity behind the walls of Dis as a prisoner but, instead, when the time came, he would rule over it as the God of the Damned Zeus intended him to be.

On the last leg of his task he found the soul he was to rescue; Trinity. It wasn’t easy but he gained her trust and in doing so came to feel the weight of the guilt of killing her. I think it was that moment my Father started to change and realize that, Olympian or not, there were things bigger than himself in this world. If he hadn’t come to that understanding, I don’t think my Father would have been able to face Ares, to tell him that all that time his beloved Wife was held captive in the Dream World and then to go and get her.

But they did, together Father and Son entered the Dream World, with little Rose tagging along unexpectedly. They found my Grandmother caught in the grip of a wicked nightmare as Morpheus held her, naked and cold, at the top of a very high tower. My Father morphed into a raven while Ares fought Morpheus, he flew to the top of the tower to rescue my Grandmother. Yet, when he reached out, when he touched her, the nightmare in her head jumped into him. He saw all manner of unspeakable things his Mother suffered and lived through and kept secret from him. They flooded into his mind until they made him scream and curled up in a ball, shaking and breathless for a long moment before he dared touch her again. In the end, Ares, Rose and my Father were victorious. They brought my Grandmother home after so long.

When they emerged from the Dream World, they woke to discover the Olympians knew what was happening in the Mortal World. Raven and Ares were accused of High Crimes Against Humanity and charged with the deaths of millions upon millions of Mortals caused not just by the rioting and upheaval but by a horrible disease called Major Falls, a weaponized version of rabies. Raven knew his friend Apollo had tricked him, lied to him all of those years. Held in Zeus’ Dungeon, it was up to my Grandmother and Rose to prove their innocence. Temporarily cast out from Olympus they wandered the Mortal World and through the utter destruction and stench of death until they arrived at a place called Area 51. There Alena found the proof she needed but not before she was attacked and bitten by a dog riddled with Major Falls. Back on Olympus, with proof in her hands, Ares was proven completely innocent of all crimes. Raven swallowed his pride and admitted his part in helping the Mortals along as they barrel toward self-destruction but maintained his innocence in the spread of the disease. He too, was found innocent in the spread of the disease that would claim over two billion lives before it was done. More than innocence, Alena proved Apollo’s guilt to the Olympians. She showed them irrefutable proof that it was Apollo who went to the Mortal World in Raven’s form and purposefully set the disease free.

Zeus was furious with Apollo for having something so dastardly behind his back but he could do nothing to punish Apollo without revealing his own dirty deeds.
Vowing to do all that they could to put the Mortal World back together, my Family left Olympus, but as the Great Gate opened, Zeus suddenly Accepted my Father as one of them, giving Raven all of the power he would have and Lordship over the Damned just as he’d promised when Raven was only an infant. Apollo railed and the others were shocked by the gesture bestowed on the young man the God of Gods detested for so long.

When all of them returned to Ares’ island, the God of War was ill. Unknown to any of them he’d contracted Major Falls and that turned out to be a very dangerous thing. In order to save Ares from a horrible death either at the hands of the disease or of his own Son, my Grandmother struck the deal with Apollo that he’d been waiting for; she would go to his bed if he would give Ares the cure he’d stolen from Area 51. Apollo jumped on it, and her, knowing he would hold this over her head and force her to his bed for many years to come.

It was on that first trip back to the Mortal World, while traveling across the remains of the United States that my Father met my Mother, Lenora an Outcast Fey who had long searched for Alena with the desire of bringing her home. At first, they didn’t trust each other, in fact they hated each other and my Father almost killed my Mother. Yet, they soon realized they shared common goals and were stronger together than apart.

I don’t want to spoil anything from here on out, some things should remain as a surprise. So, if you’d like to know more about me, how I came to be, or about the lives and stories of my Family, our friend Lisa Beth Darling has written a wonderful series, OF WAR, I suggest you read it. Start with “The Heart of War” and immerse yourself in the beginning of this sweeping saga with the story of how my Grandfather, Ares, met and fell in love with my Grandmother, Magdalena MacLeod the Lost Queen of the Fey Kingdom.

Ok…what did you think? It’s just over 2,000 words, which is probably a little long. I stopped where I did because 1-that’s all I’m really SURE of at this point because “Kingdoms” is still involving and 2-I didn’t want to give anything away…well not too much anyway. I do want people to buy “Kingdoms” LOL Yes, we left out everything about the Dark Kingdom and Shar and all of that important stuff. Again, I didn’t want to give much away as we come to the later books in the series.

But…well…if you managed to read the whole thing….would you want to buy “Heart”? You can be honest. I can take it. G’head…hit me.

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Posted on 03/08/2013, in Uncategorized and tagged , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 9 Comments.

  1. love it!!
    typo : snatched her away from her and returned –>snatched her (alena) away from HIM (ares) and returned

    it tels a lot but so much of the actual story is still left “out there” i’d very much would love to read the series after reading this

    • Thanks for the catch! I’m glad you like it. I don’t think I can make it any shorter but if you have any ideas there I’m willing to listen.🙂


      • think you could leave out the paragraph where alena finds the proof and some of those details

        after waking from their trip into the dreamworld they were were stricken by all the changes that had occurred, too the olympians, who now knew what happened, to all the things transpired in the mortal world. cast out from olympia it was now up to alena and rose to be successful in finding proof that ares and raven were innocent! odd were on their side and zeus surprised them all with how he acted when he cleared them of all charges.

        maybe something like that but more vague?

  2. Donna Ruggieri

    You already know I fell in love with Ares when Cheryl turned me on to Heart…and I never looked back!!! I’ve gotten some friends in to the series by trying to explain it to them (not half as well as you just did). I can’t wait for Kingdoms! 😄

    • Awwwww…..you’re the best! Thanks for enjoying it so much that you’re spreading the word.🙂 I’m glad you like the overview. I sent off to the blog tour host, let’s hope it passes muster.

  3. Well I have not had a chance to read your books yet (I have a tone to read and review so no time for pleasure at the moment lol.) But just reading that sounds really good!

  4. You did a great job condensing it into a few pages and I think it would draw readers.

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